Free Verse

FALL

This time of year gets colder.
Halloween and Thanksgiving are coming.
the leaves are getting older,
the birds have stopped humming.
football games will start to take place
pumpkins will be present to my face.

1) maybe more better words to use. Removal of some words

This time of year seems colder.
Halloween and Thanksgiving are coming.
the leaves are presently older.
the birds have stopped humming,
football games will take place.
pumpkins will be present to the face.

2) Removal of more words. Statement are broken up then go into longer statements. Longer statements to represent how the leaves are getting older.

The time of year seems
colder.
Halloween and Thanksgiving are
coming.
the leaves are presently older.
the birds have stopped humming.
football games will take place.
pumpkins will be present to the human face.